Final crit + further development:

After presenting my designs to the crit group, I had received feedback on which I could model the development for my final pieces, to make them yet more effective at displaying the message which I intended to communicate.

Simon, the lecturer explained to me how my blood hands design made use of a satirical story of a 'bun fight', and that it didn't fit with the tone of the piece, so I then went on to remove this story using photoshop, and replace it with the word 'Fight' to show how the news paper is based around violence and cynicism.


Also, the crit group made relevant the fact that the red, impact typeface contrasted against the colour in the background, so I have altered this aspect of the design. And also pointed out the fact that I had used the logos of the famous UK red top news papers in my design, and how it would be as effective without that addition. All of these pieces have been altered and adjusted to suit.

The design had now been edited to the feedback of the crit, and it was more fit for purpose than before.